rewrite

i would like to write you
a new story
with an origin
that makes you more
then you were
before
you started
to fall

i wouldn’t change
your beauty
or the way
you smile
in the snow
with grace
and wonder
overflowing

get stuck
on the long part
of your harrowing
adventures into
darkness
try to redeem
your cold soul

i’d remove all
the tragedy
that ended
it all